Am Mittwoch, 12. Juli 2017, 11:27:20 CEST schrieb Martin Owens:
Dear developers,
Dear Martin,
Here is the draft of the news article. Please review for spellings, omissions and errors:
Some remarks after a quick reading:
- 1st paragraph: "where and where" should be "were and where" - 2nd paragraph: "wifi" should be "WIFI" - 3rd paragraph: You probably want to start "inkscape" with an uppercase 'I' - 3rd paragraph: "svg" should be spelled "SVG" - 3rd paragraph: "Gimp" should be spelled "GIMP" - 3rd paragraph: "Gtk3" should be spelled "GTK3", "Gtk" should be "GTK" - 3rd paragraph: "Gnome" -> "GNOME" - 3rd paragraph: "glade" -> "Glade" - 5th paragraph: "Gimp" -> "GIMP" - 5th paragraph: "xpm" -> "XPM" - 6th paragraph: "Gnome" -> "GNOME" - 6th paragraph: "allow no only" -> "allow not only" - 7th paragraph: "Although this was fine" misses a "but ..." part. IMO - 2nd last paragraph: "and to talk everyone" -> "and to thank everyone"
Maybe sprinkle in some links to commits in gitlab where you mention the work done at the hackfest?
Best Regards, Martin Owens
Tobias