9 Feb
2005
9 Feb
'05
12:17 p.m.
On Wed, 09 Feb 2005 01:17:07 -0800, Jon Phillips <jon@...235...> wrote:
Okay...I took my 2nd round attack on the PR. I'm trying to make them more like professional PR, in the 3rd person, with standard form, and copying from Apple and others.
I'm sorry but I don't think people will read that much text. I think it needs to be at least twice shorter. In fact, why not take the "In Brief" section from the release notes as the base? It was written with exactly this goal - give a brief overview of the release. It seems to me that one cannot write much more than the "In Brief" description without starting to sound pretentious, or boring, or both.