You forgot to mention Elisa and Cédric :) Also, what happened on the other 3 days? Any info on the barbecue?
Maren
Am 12.07.2017 um 17:59 schrieb Tobias Ellinghaus:
Am Mittwoch, 12. Juli 2017, 11:27:20 CEST schrieb Martin Owens:
Dear developers,
Dear Martin,
Here is the draft of the news article. Please review for spellings, omissions and errors:
Some remarks after a quick reading:
- 1st paragraph: "where and where" should be "were and where"
- 2nd paragraph: "wifi" should be "WIFI"
- 3rd paragraph: You probably want to start "inkscape" with an uppercase 'I'
- 3rd paragraph: "svg" should be spelled "SVG"
- 3rd paragraph: "Gimp" should be spelled "GIMP"
- 3rd paragraph: "Gtk3" should be spelled "GTK3", "Gtk" should be "GTK"
- 3rd paragraph: "Gnome" -> "GNOME"
- 3rd paragraph: "glade" -> "Glade"
- 5th paragraph: "Gimp" -> "GIMP"
- 5th paragraph: "xpm" -> "XPM"
- 6th paragraph: "Gnome" -> "GNOME"
- 6th paragraph: "allow no only" -> "allow not only"
- 7th paragraph: "Although this was fine" misses a "but ..." part. IMO
- 2nd last paragraph: "and to talk everyone" -> "and to thank everyone"
Maybe sprinkle in some links to commits in gitlab where you mention the work done at the hackfest?
Best Regards, Martin Owens
Tobias
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