Le 31/05/2016 à 01:03, Maren Hachmann a écrit :
Great, thank you, Sylvain!
A few suggestions:
- Maybe it's better to use plural in the heading and at the bottom,
where it says 'can attend the hackfest'?
I agree for the sentence at the bottom. For the heading… I think you're right too, seeing how the page is written (I didn't see it like that first). In fact… I think the word ‘hackfest’ should appear more clearly in the content. Corrected.
Same goes for the text at the bottom that tells us about what the money will be used for when there's more than needed for the hackfest - needs to be adapted.
Oh, yes. I adapted it on the French page but I completely forgot to do it on the English page. I changed two words; not sure I can be more precise at my position.
- neither the number of days a hackfest lasts, its co-location with LGM
or that it only happens once a year are fixed. There have been discussions going on about changing any of them, so we should leave those concrete data points out, and use something more general ('some days', and for the location, maybe leave that out entirely).
Ow. I like generalities and rules. What do you refer to with ‘the location’? Do you mean I shouldn't write the place where each hackfest was in the list?
Would you put those in, Sylvain?
You're talking about your remarks? Yes, changes applied.
Note that on this page (we should remember to edit it too): https://inkscape.org/en/support-us/ the hackfest is introduced as an annual event.
Brynn (and everyone else), anything else we'd need to make it nicer?