20 Nov
2015
20 Nov
'15
12:08 p.m.
Hi,
I finally got around to doing a review of the code of conduct as I agreed to do at the last IRC board meeting. I apologize for taking so long. I think the text looks great! I also think it might be time to remove the "draft" stuff (Work in Progress at top, copies of other code of conducts at bottom.)
I made some minor editing changes:
* "Even if" -> "For example, if" (avoid awkward repeating of "even")
* "are conflicted" -> "have a conflict of interest"
* "feeling" -> "feel"
* "parent organization" -> "collaborating organizations" (We don't really have a parent organization and the text should apply, for example, to our internet hosts.)
Tav